http://nateaidanross.blogspot.com/ What stood out to me is that he went to internship from 1-3 and finished his project in just a week. Thats a really short amount of time and I think it would spark the readers interest to find out what an 'intern slave' spends their time doing. Also, his is out of the ordinary, since he said that he was cleaning and trying to entertain himself, I would like to know how well that worked out.
http://niiagamboa.blogspot.com/ What stood out to me in Nia's is that we had similar ideas. We both had a sort of focus on the differences between school and the work environment and how we are treated. I think that maybe a combination of Nia's pitches would work because you get an idea of how her internship has made an impact on her as a person, whether it was good or bad.
http://shoshmahgosh.blogspot.com/ I think a combination of shoshannas ideas would be really helpful to any newcoming sophomores. I really like hers becuase you can tell that she obviously has learned how to interct with others in a professional environment and it would be interesting to see a teens perspective on how to act in the work force
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